awwww!i love the ending!what i think would be funny and cute is if you put how shadow really got sonic to eat the soup that would be funny but i like this ending too!but i mainly like the part where they both confess...
Nice! ^ ^ And don’t worry. I don’t think the end is rushed, you wrote more then 10 000 words! However, I think it’s a good story. It’s NOT one of dose stories that written in cream and honey, it’s more serious and that’s what I like. So… Nice work! See ya! ^ ^
I like the ending it was sweet but then funny
This was an astounding ending filled with emotion and creativity. I enjoyed how at first, Shadow rejected him. That was original. ^^ Great job.
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