That was GREAT!!! I think that the story so far foucused a little too much on sonia and knux but those parts of the story were great too! great puncuation and grammar and everything. there were a few mess ups but thats okay.
omg that was awesome!!! keep it up in other storues
oh yea tails gone!! oh yea! uh huh!! oh! err i thats so sad
i love the end of this chapter!!!^_^
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!! I LOVE THE ENDING!!!!!
a bit early in the story for the kiss but it was still great!!!
omg i think im gonna hurl!!! that has gotta be one of the most fucked up rape scenes i've ever seen/read. now my ass hurts thinking about it...
this was an odd chapter.
i liked this chapter better than the last
this was a great chapter!! the scene with espio was very suspensful and less sickening then the other one.
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