Mpreg, Shadow being the pregnant one, and a SonicxShadowxMephiles love triangle..I think I love you. XD
This story is seriously great, other than a few mistakes here and there. I love how the baby can kind of sense things, and how you talked about that. Keep it going!
Author's Response: xD
Well, if you keep reviewing I'll love you too.
There isn't enough Shadow mpreg stories. And Mephiles will be appearing soon x3
Thanks ^^
Mephiles! You mean arse! =O
Once again, great job. I saw a couple unneeded commas, but otherwise it's great.
[Reviews - 53]Good start, but this needs a LOT of work. Lots of run on sentances, poor grammar, and several spelling mistakes. You might want someone to proofread this before you post another chapter.
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