I really, really like this chapter.
...Probably more than I should. >_>
You're doing a great job; my only regret is that this is a G-rated fic; judging by your writing, I bet you could come up with a killer lemon... *naughty thoughts* ~.^

Author's Response: =D Thank you! One of the beta readers at fanfiction said I should write a lemon, but I don't know if I should wait and make people like 'ARGH! Write it now!!' or just stick it in there and call it a day. But I guarantee that the rating will change! When I figure out what I'm doing... ^_^''