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Any who, the end was...egh. Am I permitted to be rude? I shall anyways: a piece of terrible shit. That was so horrible. And short. Don't forget short. It was in no way whatsoever conclusive, and still had too much dialogue.

A Pointer: PLEASE do not use their name OVER AND OVER. You just won't stop, will you? 'Sonic looked at Shadow and Shadow looked at Sonic.' 'Shadow looked up at Knuckles and Knuckles chuckled.' There are such words as PRONOUNS. USE THEM. 'He, she, it, I' are a few, dear author. Go to grammar school. >< (In fact, I learned pronouns in the SECOND GRADE. Goodness.)

Any who, back to that ending....

Tachar: It sucked.

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"No tears for the Writer, no tears for the Reader."
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Rating: 1/5 Work on, pwease. And improve. Please improve. ^^ Hope I helped somehow.

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