Aww, I thought he was going to give him a massage, but the omelette thing is funny and effectively ruins the moment. Nice job Sonic^^
Author's Response: (bows) Thanks you! Yes, Sonic does have an odd sense of timing. XD Have fun with the new chappie!
I am highly impressed with the way you pulled of this chapter. I didn't think it would play out this way, but apparently you managed to get it done.I loved the ending there, but my first thoughts before reading the final line were, "Is he going to give him a massage? Do it... do it... AWWWW MAN!" But the ending was still hiliarious in and of itself. Well done Taranea! I am enjoying every bit of this!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D Yeah, writing that ending was a lot of fun, I was giggling through the entire dormitory scene because I knew what the punchline was going to be. XD
XD HAH Funny ending to a sexy chapter. W00T!
Author's Response: Thx! Have fun with the next one! Did you get Skyblaze's email about the max word count for a chappie and whether you can raise it? I had to split this one, too...
My first reaction to this chapter is was something along the lines of "That's hot." When I wasn't laughing so hard my face hurt, at least.
Great work! I was really looking forward to this 'fight', and you pulled it off excellently. Now I'm off to re-read it another half dozen times. :D
Author's Response: XD Glad you liked. And yes, my sense of humour tends to ruin any smexyness in the bud.^^ Thanks for the comment!
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