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So, this is the Master Lemon I have heard so much about. You have an interesting writing style, but constantly get your they're's and yours wrong. Your- possessive(first person). You're-contraction for You are. There- showing or designating a place. Their-Plural possessive(third person). They're-Contraction for They Are. Common mistakes to make, and simple to correct. If you would like, I would be happy to beta for you.

Truly, an interesting story, and I wish to see more.

Sentzu, Being of Darkness and Light.

Author's Response: Well, I am working on it... even though I could do a little better to catch those mistakes. D:

As for the beta... eh... well... I haven't really thought about a beta reader since the start of this when on one wanted to do it. Since I am almost done with this story (Literally), and plan on just finishing out Genesis (As two stories, and a headache later I still cannot think straight, mainly for which I blame the Rum >.<).

If you would like to beta my next story once I get Genesis and this one finished out than let me know. XD

As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^

Hell yeah! I want blood... right now! Good addition to your story Lemon. I was beginning to wonder whether or not you were still continuing these.

Nicely done ^^

Author's Response: Wow... I don't even put this up for like half an hour and you've already commented? What... do you have some sort of mind reading power that I don't know of? Heh, anyway, I am glad that you liked it, I just hope that the ending will come out as well as I want it to.

As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^