ew...a little too much in the middle...

Oooo.... I think I'm with Shadow on this one! You did outstanding! However I am also with Illumini, due to the fact that the lemony part was, to say the least, eh so-so. ^_^

Other than that... I am looking forward to seeing the next chapter!

Oh and... you will do another lemon.... right?

Author's Response: Well, I thank you for the review none the less. I would also like to extend the fact that after further consideration... There will be another lemon.

However I won't be the next chapter. I do have to have some sort of story here.

As always... Much Appreciated ^_^

Hmm... This lemon was not to my satisfaction. Write another.

Anyway, very nice chapter, there were a few grammar errors every here and there, but nothing lemon to worry about... Can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: I appreciate the constructive criticism. I will hopefully appease you with a non-lemon chapter sometime in the near future. As for another Lemon chapter, you guys are persistant. As always, Much Appreciated ^_^