Shadow, you should know by now that Sonic much harder to kill than normal people! :D
Just a little question: you use the word 'manned' twice in this chapter. Do you mean that they're putting their hand onto whatever is mentioned (Sonic's eyes and Shadow's forehead)? I don't think that's the right word for it... ^^;
Other than my questions, great chapter! I liked the part where Sonic is wandering around inside his head. It sounds just like him; always has to keep moving!
Author's Response:Oh, it's not? I could've sworn I heard it being used as a synonym for words like 'brushed' before. I must've gotten it wrong then -_-'
I guess I'll stick to 'brushed' then I refresh my thesaurus.
Thank you!
Yay, Sonic's alive! Come on now, I want to see hugging in the next chapter. :3
Author's Response:We'll see about that...
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