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Name: Fade (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2011 4:52 PM · For: Disquieting Shadow

Shadow, you should know by now that Sonic much harder to kill than normal people!  :D

Just a little question: you use the word 'manned' twice in this chapter.  Do you mean that they're putting their hand onto whatever is mentioned (Sonic's eyes and Shadow's forehead)?  I don't think that's the right word for it...  ^^;

Other than my questions, great chapter!  I liked the part where Sonic is wandering around inside his head.  It sounds just like him; always has to keep moving!



Author's Response:

Oh, it's not? I could've sworn I heard it being used as a synonym for words like 'brushed' before. I must've gotten it wrong then -_-'

I guess I'll stick to 'brushed' then I refresh my thesaurus.

Thank you!



Name: Mystyc Cheez (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2011 6:33 PM · For: Disquieting Shadow
Yay, Sonic's alive! Come on now, I want to see hugging in the next chapter. :3

Author's Response:

We'll see about that...



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