Oh, goodness.  Now everything is falling apart, for both of them.

I don't even know what to write in here.  Good job.

Can't wait to find out how Shadow reacts!

Author's Response:

Thanks. I'll be working on that.

Shadow, you should know by now that Sonic much harder to kill than normal people!  :D

Just a little question: you use the word 'manned' twice in this chapter.  Do you mean that they're putting their hand onto whatever is mentioned (Sonic's eyes and Shadow's forehead)?  I don't think that's the right word for it...  ^^;

Other than my questions, great chapter!  I liked the part where Sonic is wandering around inside his head.  It sounds just like him; always has to keep moving!

Author's Response:

Oh, it's not? I could've sworn I heard it being used as a synonym for words like 'brushed' before. I must've gotten it wrong then -_-'

I guess I'll stick to 'brushed' then I refresh my thesaurus.

Thank you!

Sonic!  Nooooooo!

Cliffhangers are evil.  And keep us coming back to read more.  XD

I enjoyed the parts with Tails and the others!  It gives the story more depth, and reminds us that there's more going on than just giant robots attacking our favourite hedgehogs.  Good work!

Author's Response:

Mwahaha, I killed him! -slap self-

I'm glad you like the non-Sonic and Shadow parts, I was a bit worried about that. xD

Another cliffhanger!  Noooooo!   But now I'm almost afraid to find out what happens next...

This chapter confused me a little bit.  I'm not quite sure why Shadow is angry; was it just because Sonic was hiding the fact that this was Christmas Island?  (This isn't a complaint about your writing. I tend to miss these things while I read...  XD)

Author's Response:

Oh YEEEEAH, chiffhangers! :D

Yeah, it's because Sonic didn't tell him he knew the place and instead just pulled his nose the entire time.

Wow!  I didn't see it coming at all

This explains so much... but leaves so many questions!  I want to know what happens next, right now!  XD

Author's Response:

My special secret evil plan has worked, mwahaha! >:D