I think you're doing a great job so far. This is an interesting twist, and I love it.
I took my time because I didn't want to finish this so soon XD It's too brilliant funny. Sonic is killing me with his antics, and Shadow having to deal with something thats thrown him out of his element is awesome to see.
^-^ Great update, because holy SHIT o_O Even I'm looking at Shadow warily because of that ending. I almost expected Tails to be so thrown he'd slip and go 'who the HELL is this?' XD I know I would.
Author's Response: No worries, there's plenty more where that came from. ;) Seeing one of your friends suddenly walking around with wings - I'm guessing *my* first reaction would be to go 'Holy shit, did you DIE?!' XD
Ahahahahaha! Fanservice m'dear, and what a pleasure it has been. ^_^
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