Good job...Very good job , I hope you add in chap 4 soon . If you don't I might be forced to torture you.JUST GET IT UP ...please?
Yeah thanks I kinda agree that the first chapter is kinda wierd....But is my first sonadow and i needed a good villan. Yeah im gonna put up more chaps
Good story so far, a little short but alright. I'll be waiting for chapter 3
Author's Response: Thanks. Hope you read chapter one! I am so into this story that I type a bit each day to satisfy my creative urges!
Lol Dumb ass tails sucided for sonic wich he wasn't going to get BOOM ..Lol well I'll be waiting for The next chap
Author's Response: I hope you didn't find it THAT funny.
Really short. And you need to use correct poncuation and Grammer. Other then that I liked it . I'll vote untill chapter 2 comes out and see if you took my advice.
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