I feel like no words can describe what's going on in my head.
Bad. Ass.
That seems to sum it up well.
Beautifully written. It really is heartwrenching to see their pain. I could almost feel it. I loved the story. It was really well done.
Beautifully written. It really is heartwrenching to see their pain. I could almost feel it. I loved the story. It was really well done.
DDDD: Oh my god what a terrorfiying place for a cliffhanger ((sways back and forth)) Gotta know what happens.
Ooooh, very nice! :D I like it a lot. But poor Shadow... wanted because they realize just how good looking he was. He's out in the open, but I don't think he'll be enjoying it. D: I've gota to know what happens! ;_;
Amazing that this chapter is so long it needs to be split into two parts, but what can be said about this? Great chapters require great writing and this was fantastic.
I'm glad that Knuckles seems to have some clue what's going on. I wish he'd share with the rest of the class though >8C
The humor as usual is spot on. Really I can expect nothing less from either of you, and there is a lovely balance between horror and comedy that keeps my interest. Off to part two!
I think the funniest part of this chapter was when Shadow did the talon-chaos spear. Sonic's "Cool." Coupled with Shadow's rather nonchalant attitude about the whole thing simply made me die laughing for some reason.
"Oh, I cut that thing in half without barely touching it? Whatever."
It kind of reminded me of the NC's explosion cliche'. 'I know there's an explosion behind me, but I'm so bad ass it just doesn't affect me any more.'
I loved the hints of Sonadow in the story, of course I'm horribly biased as a Sonadow fanatic. I really can't see much more beyond 'Omg they touched hands 8D!' What can I say -- I'm easily pleased.
I'm sure I'm not the only one who thought the sun was going to set while Shadow was carrying Sonic. I wouldn't be surprised if that happens at least once in the story. Or even vice versa, they're falling from a great height, the sun rises and Shadow saves them. Something like that, I wouldn't really know though. After all, I don't have a peek into either of your minds.
I mentioned this in a different review to Taraena, but I think there were spelling errors in here. I'm not entirely certain if it's this one or a different story altogether to be honest since I'm playing story-catch up thanks to finals.
One thing I do notice though, is the end of this chapter falls a bit flat. It seems like it could have gone on longer or ended in a more definite way. This ending feels a little hurried and rush, not at all like a solid conclusion I'm used to reading from either of you.
...Or maybe I'm so used to cliff-hangers, I feel like I'm left hanging in the wind in the absence of them. I don't know! D8
Anyway, great job regardless! I'll cease my rambling post-haste.
So much awesome was crammed into this chapter, it was unbelievable. I was just dying to see Sonic transform. I kept my fingers crossed, but hey... At least Shadow got a bishie wind, while Sonic gets... uh. :D Exploding fur! No, dark smoke is really cool too.
I'm glad you guys updated this. It was really nice to read. I'm mean it's like 5am over here and I'm totally babbling because I can't string a sentence together, but it really was fantastic. You two work so well together, it's fantastic.
You both have a mastery of words that make it difficult for me to tell who is writing what. I mean, honestly, I wish I could tell you two apart but I can't. Your two talents are completely impressive, and shake the sonadow world to its core. Great job.
It's... Captain Bedsheet! ((is shot)) Okay, maybe not. But I'm certainly curious. Holy plot twist Captain Mobius! What're they gonna do?!
You two work brilliantly together. Honestly the entire story seems semless and beautifully done. I really can't wait until the night falls and we see the Werehog again. Will Sonic have a random doppleganger running around as well? I suppose I'm going to find out.
This is an interesting story, I'm looking forward to reading more of what you two can dish out. :) Great story.
Oh dear you two have joined forces? I don't think the Sonadow community can handle that amount of sheer ass-kickary. I think it just might explode o.o
Anyway, this was a great chaper. I honestly loved every moment of this new story and I gotta feel bad for Shadow. I feel bad for Sonic too, but ouch. I hope Shadow doesn't lose a pint of blood for every time he transforms. That could very well be slightly painful. Or extermely. I wouldn't know, I've never had wings sprout from my back before.
I feel bad that Sonic is a werehog again. The guy just can't seem to catch a break now can he? Nope. Ah well, the life of a hero is never dull. Shadow just seemed to get dragged into it this time around.
I loved the Shadow kite, it's gotta be the best thing I've seen yet. The imagery just paints itself. It's really quite funny XD!
But this is honestly a fantastic story you two have wove together. You have great flow and you two couldn't be better suited for one another :D awesome job, I shall applaud you until my hands hurt!
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