um, i'm not to sure what's going on but as the story goes on i'm sure i'll catch on.
Spelling errors through out and yeah, other than that it's okay.
cool story. ^_^ Just a few things, typos. It is follow, not fallow, and roar not rore. A beta could fix that up for you. ^_^ But interesting exposition. :thumbs up:
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