XD That ending was hilarious!!! The story is coming good so far you are doing great I'm going onto the next chapter now...
this is pretty good my friend,keep it up and maybe i'll start ta think ya as one of the best writer i met......i write in real life for contests but i always win.....................the competition sucks i tell ya.one more thing....DO YOU LIVE TO FIGHT THE KNIGHT!!!
GASP!! I wonder what happens next!
I really Didn't expect this story to be that good because of the size But this is a really good story. 4 Stars plus one for avoiding a Rape/Sex Scene where as most writers on here would have had them humping each other in no time flat. So thats five stars Great story no spelling mistakes (As far as i know) and well written Can't wait for the Next chapter
Nice chapter, I love how in character everyone was, but there was one part that struck me as out of character. When Shadow and Tails were talking and Shadow clapped his hands together, I don't see him doing that unless it was needed for a new chaos attack. xD
But other than that, the plot is really catching. Leaves me wondering if it will remain a one-sided love, since it seems like Sonic genuinely cares for Amy, and if Sonic's drink was envenomed with something thanks to the characters mentioned in the prologue.
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