^.^ It's my pleasure to review a good story. I just love how you're building up Sonic/Shadow-sama's relationship, so it feels more realistic. You also have a good way with words..despondent, not many people use that. I applaud your choice of words and I absolutely love what Shadow-sama was talking about, ya know, how humans take and never give back. So true. Oh, if you're wondering why I don't say things you need to improve on is mainly because there's NOTHING I see wrong with your fic! ^___^ Its all good!!!!! I can't wait to see where Shadow-sama plans to go in the next chapter. Keep on keeping on ^^

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I thought my writing was very ameuturish actually. The comments about humans are actually my sentiments... Thank you very much.