*Sqqqqqqqeeeealllll* That, is, sooooooo cute!!! The only thing that I had trouble with was that Sonic was the father and not Shadow. I believe that Shadow is more of the seme kind, and Sonic is more like the uke. Other than that, there was a one spelling mistake of when you spelled 'sink' you spelled 'sick'. And then there was a FEW grammer mistakes. If all of them were gone, then this would be an awesome one shot. 9/10

Author's Response:

Thanks for the feed back! I'll fix it straight away!