mm..i really injoyed this stoy and sad to thing you won't write more. you have such a nack...hard to think it's your first one. however you shouldn't do something you arn't comfy with....i'm galde you wrote and shared this wonderful work and will try and remain contint that you don't want to continue ^_^

Dude, that was low. You NEED to continue this. I want Sonic an Shadow ta-GET-HEEEER!!!

You know... it was better if you let the fic end with the second chapter... I mean, this is well written and all, but, seriously... it was better to leave it to the second chapter...

I love how you used a lot of decriptions to describe everything. It really made the story seem more reallistic. In other words, your story was bitchin!

Wow... what is WRONG with you?? This is seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read! Seriously. It's nice to see someone out there with a great respect for the english language. =_= I didn't even see any TYPOS in this fic. Very well done, very dark, and yet, oddly interesting. I'd never imagine getting much joy into reading a story about rape, but this was really captivating from the first paragraph. I couldn't help but finish the entire thing! It's too bad this one wont be continued, but luckily you have many more fictions to read! Thanks for writing this wonderful fanfic!