Wow... what is WRONG with you?? This is seriously one of the best fanfics I have ever read! Seriously. It's nice to see somone out there with a great respect for the english language. =_= I didn't even see any TYPODS in this fic. Very well done, very dark, and yet, oddly interesting. I'd never imagine getting much joy into reading a story about rape, but this was really captivating from the first paragraph. I couldn't help but finish the entire thing! It's too bad this one wont be continued, but luckily you have many more fictions to read! Thanks for writing this wonderful fanfic!
nice chappie. ^_^ clever shads. sonics a wily one. :P
Wow... o_o I've been through alot of the adult fiction here on Sonadow.com and, frankly, alot of it has been pretty lacking. ; Especially the darker stuff. So, it was with some reluctance that I opened your story up to read it. Only to find I was glad I did. @_@ This is well written, well done and... remarkably in character. -Especially- for an explicit yaoi fic! o_o I'm VERY impressed! ^^ For your first attempt at smut, I'm startled, I really am. This is excellent! I am now going to go and see what other fics you have available, because it's obvious you're a good writer. =3
Author's Response: ....o.o ........Oh....my....gawd. People can we say EGO BOOST?! -squealing in pure glee- I've been complimented! By CARRIEPIKA!! -schoolish fangirl scream- YAAAAAAY!!! There is no way to measure my worshiping glorified shrine-in-my-closet luffing of you! :3 Okay, there isn't a shrine YET, but I'm making room! I have too many shoes. -.o Any way, much loving and huggles for the review, CarriePike. You've made my day, seriously. I'm just going to bounce through the rest of it humming the 'We're in the money' tune. I'm not rich in real monies, but when your ego is getting as inflated as mine is (and it is, I warn you) you don't need to BUY the hot air balloon ride :P
TOO WORDY! i mean, great story, great structure everythings great, but the beginning, i had to skip like 3 paragraphs of repeatings. overall reallllllly gooooood! but just try to get to the point faster. PLEASE. well overall i give it an 8 out of 9.34 now for the shameless plug part. you can't have the internet without ads, right? Venom: according to quantum physics, it's good in another dimension Boku no Kage: A great man once said Boku no Kage is great. i forgot his name. {YOUR ADD HERE! JUST WRITE A REVIEW FOR VENOM!}
WHEEEEE!!!! *glomps nam* lovely fic! It just... damn good! *thumbs up* aiyah.... Go shadow, and poor innocent sonic... :P why are heroes so silly. :) *flick acorn at nam, but it falls short* darnit, there goes my threat...
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