You might want to check your grammar on this one. Other than that, great plot
great beginning. It makes me want to keep reading.
lol. GOOD RIDANCE TO AMY!!!!!!!!
lol. GOOD RIDANCE TO AMY!!!!!!!!
I love this part. I want to know if this story is complete or not because I wanted to continue reading it.
I love the story. Youe story was the first sonadow story I read.
Wow! I like your story! But won't you write more? I love this story! I even read it 2 times! . Ok bye. oh! btw: http://fanfiction.sonadow.com/viewstory.php?sid=290 Here is my very irst story! If you wan't, read it and then eview if you liked it. ;)
Author's Response: well, There is more ^.^ they enter there chao in the races! and thanks for the review, and Yeah I'm working on another Sonadow story, a very very short one called chains. I'll Post it Soon! (BTW check out my Sonadow art in Krissy's Sonadow Section)
Uh...sorry, but I seem to recall a colander being a bowl in which you drain liquids from food?
You havent gotten any reviews yet but you should!This is a great story and love the plot.Please update
Author's Response: Thank you, And i just Submitted it so maybe that's why.
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