This story just keeps getting better. You have a definite talent for writing. Although this time I think you've left me in too much suspense, why did you have to end the chapter there? that's not creative writing, thats plain cruelty! Bah, nevermind my whinging. Just don't quit while you're ahead. It's truely excellent stuff.
Author's Response: Wow, you realy are confusing my poor little brain now. XD *shot* Thanks for the wonderful comment.
Yay for the 4th chapter! I really like how you write, and I would really like to see how this is going to end. ESPECIALLY with Amy.
Author's Response: Personally, I like Amy. I know alot of people cant stand her, but she's just a little girl who loves her hero. I can respect that. Dont expect anything too cruel.
o.0 *drool*
Really, this was amazing! Make more chapters! Please! I need more!
Holy shit that was good! Damn! I'm usually real tough on fanfiction, but YOU!!! You were the one that really convinced me to join Sonadow.com!!! Make more chapters!!! Before I gouge my own eyes out! Christ that's good!!!
Author's Response: No need to bust out the fork. I am making more chapters soon! ^__^ Thank you!
This is surely a well written story. I barely saw any error. I hope you're gonna add some more chapters. Really.
Author's Response: Yes, I am planning on more chapters, as well as mors stories. Thanks for reading!
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