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Name: ShadowCats16 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2006 8:58 PM · For: Chapter 1
I like it...no love it I cn't wait til the next chapter comes! Ohh I hope its long and great! I don't know why but I like long Chapters!
Shadow: Probly b/c you have nothing better to do but set infront of your stupid computer and read these storys!
Me: hehe :D Probly! *just to let ya know I half hyped on and half crazed for no good reason in the world right now!


Name: sonadowluver93 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2006 5:51 PM · For: Chapter 1
*cries* NO SHADOW!! DON'T KILL HIM!! *pounces Shadow*

This is a wonderful first chapter! Hope you can write another soon.


Name: Vampiress_Heart_Girl (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2006 9:50 AM · For: Chapter 1
I like it. The beginning was a little confusing but now I get it. I really like it!


Name: Rusetassle (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2006 5:54 AM · For: Chapter 1
considering it's your first sonadow story posted on here, Its not bad... but it definately needs work :P

Just a few details of emotions and where they are. Obviously they're in a bed, but what kind of bed? what kind of room? But not much to improve on. I get the jist of the sotry but you also need to explain how he got Sonic to love him?

Lol well, good luck... I'll wait for the next chapter


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