"'. . .[m]y point is that Shadow is a powerful, and possibly confused creature. He has the power to do great harm to all of us; I just want you to be on your toes. He might be on our side, but just in case, please be careful'" (More Than A Friendship).
I quote this because you have one error that occurs twice. Right after "side," there is a comma that should not be there. IT is because the second clause is dependent because it lacks a subject. It occurs again after the word "powerful." I like this story, but grammatical errors are bringing you down! 7/10! This is interesting, but I hope you remembered to add the Psychological change over of Sonic turning from Amy to Shadow!

Author's Response: Funny thing about the commas is that when I'm writing, I always feel like I'm using too many of them. It is a little nagging feeling much like the old "did I live the oven on" type thing. I guess I should have paid attention to it. Thanks for reading and as you can/will see in later chapters, Sonic makes it clear that he has no romantic intentions with Amy. I could cement that idea in a confrontation between the two, and I might, but I have wanted to stay away from that for now. Thanks for the R&R!

Author's Response: speaking of errors, "live" should be "leave."

Well, nice fic you have here. I'll be waiting for next chapter

Author's Response: Please forgive me for freaking out a bit but oh my god! I LOVE your stuff, especially "Live, Open Your Heart, and Learn." I can't believe that you are reading my stuff! Thanks for the review!

Nice chapter title. Any who, the Sonic-gay-joke-thing was funny. XD Good place to put it too. Not to mention, the characters were in character and the writing was good. ^^ Great chapter, and sweet length.

Author's Response: Good to here that the characters still seem like themselves. I'm always crazy and worried about that when writing the dialogue. Thanks for the review as always!

"Sonic had a mission to accomplish." XD Funny. Argh, though. You're making me feel the need to update. >< Any who, the end seems in character of Sonic. Not to mention the description was great. This was an awesome chap, and I'm glad to see this back up! ^^

Author's Response: I'm SOO glad that you liked it. I was really worried about how it would come out being away from it for so long. Thanks for the review as always.

"No one knew who said it, nor did they care. All that mattered was the response. They got that response in the form of a crushed hero solemnly shaking his head side to side, trying to hide his obviously frustrated eyes. The resulting silence was a terrible one, but Sonic soon broke it.

'Sayonara, Shadow the Hedgehog.' At these few words, the hero turned and exited the room" (More Than A Friendship).
First of all, your name sucks. Secondly, no, it is not boring. The description almost portrays the coldness and atmosphere of the space colony and battle. Lacking "triumph," the desctive detail delves fully into the spirailing death of Shadow. I copied the above quote because it is an absolutly wrong interpetation of events leading up to Sonic's "famous" line, "Sayonara, Shadow the Hedgehog" (Sonic Adventure 2).

The story is not bland, but it lacks interest. Because the first is a mere retelling of previously thought of events, it is your most poetic and strongest atmospheric setting. However, Sonic Team had more people and more time than you to make that come to life. Very good, 7/10

Author's Response: Thanks for the criticism! I know the name sucks, I probably should of taken more time on it. As for the ending of SA2, I didn't intend for it to be exactly like the game. I should've thrown up a 'Mild AU' warning I guess.
Thanks for your comments, I'll try my best to improve!