Sorry for not reviewin' sooner. ^^; This is getting rather interesting. You forgot to capitalize one word, but that's all. Those news reporters. >< Hate 'em. Hate em, hate 'em, hate 'em. Great story. This is going somewhere. Keep it up. ^^
Author's Response: I hate persistent reporters too. All the more reason to have them play a role in the story! I'm tryin to get chapter 3 finished but I'm slowing down a bit. I'll try hard to get it out tonight though.
DAMN YOU FOR CUTTING IT THERE!!
I love the story so far.. excellently written.. Can't wait to see more!
Author's Response: Heh. Glad to see there are still people around. This place was pretty quiet the past few days. Well its good to know that some people are intrigued and I'm actually working on chapter 3 right now. Expect it tonight or tomorrow night!
DAMN YOU FOR CUTTING IT THERE!!
I love the story so far.. excellently written.. Can't wait to see more!
Nice. This is pretty good for your first. Much detail, and good length=Nice compliment from Takashi. ^^ You kept them in good character. The way you wrote about Final Hazard was slightly dull, but you described it well.This is going somewhere good. I can tell. Keep it up.
Author's Response: Thanks! It is encouraging to know that someone liked the first effort. As for the Final Hazard, I got stuck there for a while and really wanted to move on to the more dramatic aftermath.
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