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leaved-left. mils-miles. 'he does not'-'he is not' lair-liar. This chapter was well written, besides the mistakes. You have an interesting view on their personalities, but keep them in character. Great job.

Author's Response: Thanks! You are the only one that helps me with my grammar. I try to keep them in character but like I said in chap 1, I don’t have much knowledge about there personalities. Do you have any advice to how I can make it better? Thanks again and; See ya! ^ ^

I can't read this. Let me explain the major flaw of your summary. "There’s a key. The ultimate key, with the power to unlock everything, even time itself" (The Key).
Unlock time? WTF? Time is merely a device used to measure a span of movement(s). It is to assume that if all life died, so would time. Also, in the equation that t [time] and L [life]
t=L, therefore, neither exist. That is also a speculation about the reasons of what makes something live and not live, or is there a difference between the two.

Author's Response: It’s a difficult discussion you brought up and I may have misunderstood you, but when I say ”unlock time” I mean like time travelling. Doesn’t they say that, when Shadow and/or Sonic Chaos Control they move independent of time? This is something like that but taken one step further. I will try to explain what the Key is in chapter three or something like that, but like I said, it’s a difficult subject. Speculations about tings like this are difficult and I’m sorry that you don’t like the story, but I can’t make everybody happy. About” live or not live”, I think that there is no difference between those two. Everything is made out of atoms and all atoms are, sort of, alive, so nothing can be dead in that aspect. The human eye just can’t see the movement.

I'm definately interested in where you'll take this. added it to favorites so ill know when you update :)

Author's Response: Thanks! ^ ^ Wow! The first chapter in my first story and it’s already a favorite. Once again, thanks, and I hope you like the rest of the story. See ya! ^ ^