The summary pulled me off at first, but this is really interesting. Sonic's a grown man? Creative. Good job, and wonderful emotion. I can tell it was supposed to be sad...and it was. I hope ya update soon.
Author's Response: Yay, another good review! Yea, he's like.. 27. Thanks, Takashi
aww how sad I like it though even if it is sad
Author's Response: hehe, glad you do. I'll slowly work on the next chapter and get it up. Why? Because I'm lazy. ^_^
PLEASE UPDATE MORE
Author's Response: Lol, I will when I get around to it.. I really want to finish this one, I already have half the plot in me head. Not something I usually do..
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