hmm...bit wierd...but funny lol
That was really cute,that was really good chapter
awww..poor sonic...*sniffs*
aww that was cute i love sonadow
Author's Response: Of course! Everyone here loves sonadow!
yay Sonic's back ^.^
Author's Response: Yup! he's back
I am loving this plot. *grins* That necklace section was great. Awesome work. Keep it up. I can't really find anything wrong save for a repeated paragraph or too, but that's nothin'. You guys had wonderful emotion. *thumbs up* Not to mention the length is fantastic! ^^
Author's Response: GAH!! I hate repeated paragraph ><
I may sound sick, But I liked the part when Shadow was asleep. XD I wonder what will happen between Shads' and Mephy next. XP
Anyway, I like how you have put this togather, and how the plot twists in every chapter, I will be waiting in anticipation for the next chapter, so.. hurry! XD As far as I can see there is nothing wrong. Keep up the excellent work. ^^
Author's Response: YAY!! We did gewd work ^^
Mephiles IS a recolor. XD Any who, that's an interesting twist to have him protecting Shads. Great idea, guys. And LENGTH. Thank you for length. *grins* Great job so far. I love this story.
Author's Response: It took me FOREVER to edit this. All I did was copy, paste, and edit for hours!
Wow....Mephiles isn't a complete asshole....
Author's Response: Yes he is.. but we love him!
ebilnessnessness
Author's Response: Yes.. I am ebil XP
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