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Name: soina (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2007 6:37 PM · For: Chapter 1
interesting..
no one hes done that idea before ^^
...Sex toys for the win!!
xDD lol

Author's Response: Smex toys!! *nods* tou are in almost all of my stories ^^ even though I haven't gotten to that part in most of them


Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2007 2:18 PM · For: Chapter 5
Ya repeated a paragraph, but the length is great. You guys are...descriptive. O_O Egh. Ignmore me, this stuff isn't my strong point. ^^; Great chapter. Yesh, it was LONG and AWESOME! ^^


Name: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2007 12:48 PM · For: Chapter 5
I've seen longer ~.^ but it's still the longest I've seen from you and that was a mean spot to drop off...EVIL CLIFFIE!!!!

Author's Response: Be gratefull. I would've stopped at the part where Shadow gets pinned but i'm feeling nice today...... but i'm still EBIL!! MWA HA HA!!


Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2007 6:43 PM · For: Chapter 4
Um, Sonic wouldn't be able to accelerate that fast by running cold. The Silver thing kinda seems like how I portray him. One second all annoying, the next he's happy around ya. Any who, that was awesomely done. 'I'll kiss the booboo!' XD I myself CANNOT write that stuff. *tips hat* Good work. This was a great chap. ^^

Author's Response: Yesh! I got another goog review from you! *hugs* Getting a good review from you is like impressing a god ^_^ It takes a bit more to make you give a 'great chappie' review. example: When Nightshade says "Great Chappie! Please continue ^_^" You might say "It needs a bit more critic critic critic critic critic etc etc"

Author's Response: spelled good incorrectly


Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2007 7:50 PM · For: Chapter 3
I would suggest introducing the merhogget's name by other means than narrative. Any who, this is interesting. I hope ya continue. ^^

Author's Response: Well... sonadowluver was doing Sheila and ... yeah ^_^' at first she didn't even said who Sheila was.


Name: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2007 6:26 AM · For: Chapter 2
it ended to soon T_T

Author's Response: Too bad XP


Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2007 4:39 PM · For: Chapter 2
You repeated a paragraph, no biggy. Any who, the confrontation is pretty much what Shads would do. Any who, nice chapter. ^^ This was fantastic! And I hope your week got better.


Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2007 6:52 PM · For: Chapter 1
ORIGINAL!!!!!!! ^_^ This is a nice rp. Wonderful jobs, folks. I was having a bad day at work, and this story lightened it up a little. Thanks. ^^

Author's Response: Welcome! ^_^

Author's Response: BTW I was having a REALLY bad day *shivers* >< but the reviews cheered me up ^_^


Name: Nightshade (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2007 6:15 PM · For: Chapter 1
That's awesome! I've never read a story with them being merhogs and it was an odd yet interesting twist and I liked it so good job I hope to see more for this

Author's Response: We already have the next few chappies ready to be posted so you'll be seeing more soon.


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