*claps* Bravo! Bravo! But my idea about them getting in a fight over Shadow's job is gonna happen too right? Cause you could fit that in with the story you know. Shadow is so shaken that he isn't registering anyone's feelings..
Author's Response: Yes. ^^ That'll be in there. ^^ I also have many...other...ideas for this, too. XD I hope you like it, since its because of YOU I'm doing this. LOL Anywayz, yesh. ^^ Shadow is going to go through many, many stuff in this story...*snickers evilly*
Oh jeez, I love the saying in narration 'dear reader'. XD One of my favorites. Any who, you did fairly well. The line “10,000 years…10,000 years I have waited just to have you in my grasp!” added some nice impact. This story seems quite to the point and strange enough, it sort of works. Nice job. Keep it up. ^^
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