Ooh I loved Supers taunts and commentary x) It's nice to see Silver and Knuckles adding to the plot : DD It's all getting curious and curiouser~
Author's Response: You like Super! Yay! :D Yeah, Silver and Knuckles add their own little sub plots of doom. Next chapter (way over halfway done) gets ever more curious, so I'm thinking you'll like it. Thanks for reviewing. ^^
lol, I liked your ending AN, thanks for a good read. I thought I was gonna read shotty newbie stories forever XDD
anywho, knowing what the titles for the chaps in French mean, help :) Thank God for French class, yo
anywho, i'm catching back on and i'd love to see more. Great story, good job :)
Author's Response: Frenchie! Yay! Ça va? XD Any who, I felt guilty seeing all the n00b stories floating around, so I cracked and wrote more. Good to know you're catching on. And, thanks for the encouragement. I try. ^^
Ah, I was waiting for this! :o Good to see it came. The ending doesn't seem too odd, it's just a cliffhanger; which is evil. But hell, I know, they're addicting.
I hope everything is okay in your personal life. =/ Obviously, I don't know, but I hope you're staying strong. But back to the story; the Black Arms and Black Doom were written very nicely. Too nicely. God, I wanted them to just explode. And Shadow tags along with it? That killed me. It's hard to imagine Shadow related to some mutant alien...thing. At least Silver tried to help, though Sonic technically...interrupted? I can't wait for the next chapter to just tie up the cliffhanger. @_@;
Author's Response: Really? I thought it sounded...weird. Any who, good to know I managed to characterize the Black Arms population well enough. You'll see why Shadow tagged along, though. There was a reason. And yes, Sonic mildly interrupted the flow of the psychic channel. Seemed like a good idea at the time, but.... *scratches head* Now it just seems to muddle the story even more. Glad to know you liked it! ^^
Evil, you are pure undiluted evil. You left us with another cliff-hanger!
You know I am actually starting to like Super; his ‘personality’ is just ruddy well amusing. I hope whatever personal problem you mentioned in the Author’s notes are resolved, and if they aren’t then good luck finding a solution (if it’s possible).
As always I am looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Your compliment has made me smirk. Yes, I am pure undiluted evil and very proud. As for Super; yes, his personality will seem amusing--because it is. His dialogue is the most enjoy to conjure out of all. And my problems will be solved eventually (I'm sticking my hand in a fish bowl and hoping it's over.) :P
Sorry it took too long for me to review.
Not gonna lie, I'm not as big of a fan of sonilver compared to sonadow, but this is still great to read. I don't know if I would ever cheat on Shadow; doesn't seem the type to mess with. I really like his dislike towards Shadow, and I do think his jealously will be extremely interesting. The triangle will be certainly entertaining. :P
Author's Response: Sonadow's gonna win anyways , so I suppose it doesn't exactly matter. :P Any who, I wouldn't cheat on Shads either lest I wanted a one way ticket to hell. Glad to know you find the starting of the triangle to be mildly entertaining. I only hope I can fulfill those expectations. Thanks for reviewing as always, Skitzoism. ^^
First of all, I wouldn’t worry about how long everyone has to wait. It’s more than worth if for a decent sized chapter, that’s also well written. I am rather glad you didn’t move the sonilver too fast. But even if you did I am certain it could have worked quite well in this twisted little universe you’ve created.
Having super in your head would drive you nutty… or it would if I didn’t already think he was halfway there.
Oooh, a cliff-hanger! I hate those things, who is it? I cannot wait for your next update to find out!
Author's Response: I'm glad you share my views and am very glad that this universe is twisted. It's always good to have things be twisted. ^^ And yes, having Super in there would drive anyone to the brink of madness...and back. O_o Personally, I hate cliff-hangers too. I just needed something, though, to make the end work and sound cool. :P Don't worry, they will be revealed first thing.
it seemed like years of waiting but this chapter made up for it but the sonilver was a bit too light but it did work and dont worry too much about the lenght of it i`d prefur it if it was shorter chapters and made faster than long and waiting age`s
Author's Response: I'll see what others think of the wait and extra quality versus the lack of wait and sucky writing. I refuse to write only five hundred words or only seven hundred words. These chapters will remain being relatively long (in between 1000 and 2000 words). So, I apologize, but I will not take your interesting suggestion. It was going to take longer, but I knew someone would complain about the wait. Though, never in a million years did I think someone would complain about length. *shakes head* I should just trash Inutile right now, then.... And thanks for telling me if my sonilver was too light. ^^ I thought I was being too quick so I split my material in half (or censored it, if you may). Originally, it was a lime, but.... All for the sake of the story, ya know? ^^; I've started the next chapter and for you, I'll try to get it done quicker. Thanks for the feed back.
The only word I can truly come up with to describe this story is twisted. Yet that’s what makes me click the next button and stop to review. I adore the way your writing this, the characters are fascinating, and oh dear, poor Knuckles.
I think Silver might be a little bit less than sane at the moment, and I just can’t wait to see what you’ve devised next. All of this can be squished down to four simple words -> I love this story!
Author's Response: Twisted is one of my nicknames, my fellow author. And the next chapter is about to get more twisted. But, it's good to know that you like the characterization and my style. ^^ And yesh, poor Knux. Wouldn't want to go out like that. About Silver...the dude's always seemed like one of those in-the-closet maniacs to me.... We'll just have to see what he does. To close this response: Thanks for reviewing and loving the story! ^^
@_@ idk, if i'm lost or i'm just reading too fast, but i'm confused and I love your story =]
Author's Response: I have a tendency to confuse others. I'll try and make the story more simple. Thanks for the feedback. ^^
You made me wait for this chapter, it was killing me. xD But a love triangle? Well, I don't know. I guess you want to see Shadow ruthlessly murder someone if it's someone else liking Sonic. We did see how he got jealous over Amy, I can only imagine what would happen if someone else liked Sonic. The only reason why I say Silver is because Silver is the one character in the story where I'm like, 'Wow, he deserves to get harmed'.
Other then that, good chapter, I really hope another one is coming soon! =)
Author's Response: Yay! You think he should get hurt too? XD I'm sorry for the wait, by the way. I tried so hard to finish it quickly, but...fate's not been kind. ^^; Glad to know you liked this chapter. And, thanks for reviewing. ^^
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