I'm on the edge of my seat! Have been through the whole thing! You have such a way with words. Also you keep the character's persona's perfectly in-tact. Although I think Shad's might have slipped a bit here. Nonetheless he was under stress and that would have made sense for his behavior. I also can't wait to see what Sonic will do. You are an excellent writer! Can't wait for the next part!
Ah wow! Did you base this off of Phoenix Wright? Cuz it's just as exciting as it ^_^ I love this story! Hope the Sonadow comes soon though. I know you haven't updated in a while, so I'm not sure if you're still doing this contest thing, but if you are, I have a question: How are you going to pick a winner? Depending on the answer, I may enter the contest.
But anyway, I hope you don't abandon this story! I love it! Please update soon!
I know it’s probably not going to become common knowledge since the only other participant in Shadow and Amy’s conversation is dead, but I would truly love to know what they were talking about!
Ah yes the contest… you know I cannot remember Sharp’s real name… but I shall go back through and read again and see if I can make something for this contest of yours, since I know how annoying it is to have something you’ve given the readers a chance to participate in completely ignored. *Scuttles off to find his real name*
Author's Response: Heh, heh, thanks, I appreciate your understanding. Glad you're going to at least give it a shot. And as for what they were talking about, don't worry. That'll come out in due time...heh, heh, heh...
Interesting turn of events and Sharpe's logic is astounding. Well done, I spotted no errors. I don't think the ending was seriously rushed, either. It was quite a turn of events, riveting to a point, and was very enjoyable. Keep it up. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting, that makes me feel a whole lot better about it. Though I am pissed at you for posting over me. ^^
Yay first review, anyway I agree with why the holdup on your story. And also what a curve you threw with the investigation. Hope to see the next chapter soon.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Spring break is coming up, so there's a good chance I'll get it done then if not before.
Well at least you did not make me sound like a drug addict anyway, also more reviews so you hurry up and put the next chapter up
Author's Response: *sigh* yeah, I don't count five reviews by the same person as five reviews, but don't worry, I'll put up the next chapter when I've finished it. Just got Assassin's Creed...am addicted to it. So blame Ubisoft for making it.
Author's Response: okay, three reviews, but you get my point.
althou i felt a little insulted by the way you replied me Necros, in the e-mail
Author's Response: Sorry about that, I just didn't expect you to give me a whole story and you used my character in ways that shocked me (though I concede, he could be like that sometimes). I wasn't trying to be insulting, just amusing. I mean, imagine the reaction of the court if someone just burst in and said all that...that would largely be it. Unless, of course, you provided some supporting evidence, which you did not...and in a trial with no jury, evidence is everything. Without it, the judge cannot give a verdict. Again, sorry, I didn't mean to be insulting.
Author's Response: PS...Being all over the place isn't exactly a bad thing...especially when it comes to this case. ^^
bu the way Necros I got the reply for somethings I said, somethings where meant to be said in time. The whole Serena issue was the main point. so is she or is she not a ________ you know...
Author's Response: *sigh* fine, if you must know, she's not a __________. She's 100% ________. Soz, I just hate being specific and love being ambiguous about everything, even if it's not significant.
great chapter. I only have to say I solved it, I think,
"To what length will GUN go for power"
Author's Response: Eh heh heh heh...you COULD be totally right...or you COULD be completely and utterly wrong...I'm glad you like it either way.
This was great! I unfortunately had to leave to go to work mid-chapter and getting home to finish it was all I could think about all shift.
I would like to point out that Shadow is out of character, and very much so. Here is a the kicker, I don't care! This is one of those rare stories that is handled well enough to make OOC work. Congrats.
PS: As for your contest, I haven't neglected it. I simply don't have a fan character. I know most do but I don't. I'm perfectly happy with Sonic myself, so that is my explanation.
Author's Response: You don't have a fancharacter?! The universe has imploded! Heh heh. Tis okay, I don't really have one either, unless you count Sharpe, Serena, Williams, Carr, Mike and all the other humans in this. I try not to make my own Mobians, because whenever I do, I find one remarkably similar in the games/comics that I haven't played/read yet. As for Shadow's OOCness, that's pretty much held true since Chapter 1. Tis what finding love and being put on trial will do to you. He'll lapse back to his moody angsty self now and again...
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