Very good story so far and I indeed find your way to intice readers into reading more of a story is quite refreshing this gives me hope for my story -_-0 anyway please continue and expect an e-mail from me for the contest not just because I want to but also because Takashi is entering it ( MY ETERNAL RIVAL) evils aside I want to crush Takashi with a little friendly competion (grins evilly) so anyway again this is great and good luck and please reda and review my story thanks ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you wizardramen, you have gone up in my books. However, if your entry is the one I just got...you forgot to include the answer to the question ^^'. I'm inclined to overlook it, but you might want to email me again and tell it if you want to win out over Takashi...otherwise you sorta lose by default. Try Chapters 3 or 4 if you're stuck. As for your story, I read it, but I haven't reviewed. I have this phobia of giving criticism you see. But since you asked me...I'll try.
Author's Response: Sorry, that's wizardmaren. I see maren and I think ramen. Ramen is goooood...
Hilarious. Absolutely hilarious that I was the only one who entered. Also very, very annoying. I'd agree with you on that one. Any who, good chapter. Your dialogue is fantastic along with characterization. The section where Shadow was staring at Serena was simply priceless, I may add. No real suggestions. Think I spotted a half-error that I wasn't sure about which means it wasn't an error. XD So, great job, Necros. ^^
Author's Response: By all means, tell me what the error/half error was. I make tons of mistakes. I only just realized that I've been saying 'gravel' instead of 'gavel' (the hammer the judge slams on the little post for all you legal n00bs) and had to go back and correct it. As for other contest entries, even if everyone STILL ignores me, I'm sure if I bug her enough I can get sonadowluver93 to do it...she liked the idea when I ran it past her. Although she keeps putting off reading my updates. Ah well. Thanks again, my ever faithful Takashi.
you really can cut the tension with a knife. anyway great story and my suspicions of ..... but Shadow must have had a part in it, at least something small than usual. Finnally the trial, I can't wait!!!
PS: Great Job
Author's Response: Heh, thanks. Weren't you going to email to ask if your suspicions were correct earlier? Because if you did, I didn't recieve it.
yes please update soon the wait is killing me.
Author's Response: Don't worry, it'll be soon. I'm almost done with chapter 5.
If I read correctly, don't they mention his name in the reading? Might try and make a complete fool outta myself by entering. :P Any who, nice story. Great dialogue as usual, not to mention some fantastic descriptions and characterization. I find the detective's reaction to seeing Sharpe rather amusing as well. Keep it up. ^^
Author's Response: Well, so far you're the only one. Interesting idea. And as I said, it's a ridiculously easy question. The name is actually mentioned twice in the story. Also, glad you liked the chapter.
daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa! right in the middle of the suspence you STOP!!!!!!!!???????!!!...............excellent work leave the reader wanting more
Author's Response: heh heh, I know. I'm evil.
grrr why must you always end it when it's getting good >.< hurry and update
Author's Response: Because I enjoy your futile cries of fury oh so very much and it keeps you hooked for the next chapter *smirk*
I don't get this chappie
Author's Response: I don't get what you mean by that, I'm afraid ^^'. Basically, it's all about Sonic getting a lawyer for Shadow and introducing said lawyer to the reader.
oh my this is getting suspenceful
Author's Response: I wouldn't say it's too suspenseful yet...wait til the later parts of the trial...and the bits in between.
I like it continue
Author's Response: Glad you like it, and I am, as you can see.
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