I forgot, you dont have to worry about me Nightshade I alreay reviewed it twice even
Author's Response: Heh, unfortunately, two reviews by one person doesn't cut it. But don't worry, I already had two before you.
Well for what I see, just a few ajustments you could chage the whole story, anyway forget that
The story is great, a moody Shadow and a pissed Sonic what is better for a story.
Author's Response: I'm curious about your first statement...what adjustments? Tell me, for I'm genuinely interested. As for what is better for a story, for me it's as many shady characters as can be crammed in, one truly evil and twisted character, one totally naive and innocent character, and plot twists in as many directions possible. Not to say that's what's happening here...that's just what I love in stories. ^^
Awwww poor Shadow*cries.*I must have more!!!
Author's Response: Well, start bullying others into reviewing my work and you shall have more...heh heh heh...
I can't wait for the trial, then. *grins* I like gore. Any who, I notice a large amount of ellipses. This entire chapter was filled with 'em. You could replace some with dashes, and some parts I don't really think you need them. Your lines were great though. Maybe I'm just crazy or something but the line “You know how it is these days. Freedom of speech, democracy and all that righteous bullshit." sounds a whole lot like the American government at times. XD Any who, this is a nice chapter, story-telling was great. There is no doubt you can write. Keep it up. ^^
Author's Response: Yeah...about ellipses...*smirk* I like the look of them better than dashes... You're right though, I do tend to get carried away with them. My other group of critics say I shouldn't use ?! all the time as well. Actually it should be never. Apparently a question mark/exclamation mark is the sign of a cheap fanfic as opposed to something well written. What was it they said...oh yes. "The power of your words should eliminate the need for them." Anyway, thanks for your detailed review and criticism as ever, Takashi. You keep up your work as well *wink*
well Amy is kinda expected for her to die, if it were another couple fanfic then maybe it could have been someone else
Shadow x Knuckles = Rouge
Shadow x Tails - Sonic
Shadow x Rouge = Knuckles
Shadow x Amy = Sonic
but since its
Shadow x Sonic = the choice is none other than Amy, so sorry Takashi but Amy is dead.
Now let us pray for her poor fangirl spirit...
Author's Response: Eh heh heh heh...go right ahead and pray...because a certain blue hedgehog won't be...I also apologize to Takashi, I did quite like his justification in choosing Rouge and was seriously about to write it...til all the Amy votes came in...well done to him for getting the special mention too. I hate you even more now, Takashi. *smirk*
I say Kill Amy...
She deserves it and for a sonadow fic it defenetly fits...
Author's Response: *sigh* somehow, I knew the votes would be swinging this way...*smirk* Looks like it's going to be Amy then...unless anyone would like to make some last minute voting?
Author's Response: Author's Response: And the breakdown so far is: Tails:1 Knuckles:1 Amy:5 Rouge:3 Cream:0 Random human:1
Good story so far seems like it should get interesting as the story progresses.
I am going to jump on the bandwagon and say off Amy because she is so annoying.
Author's Response: Thanks for you review and your vote. You're right, it's going to get a lot more interesting once the trial gets underway. Oho, my devious mind...
Author's Response: And the breakdown so far is: Tails:1 Knuckles:1 Amy:4 Rouge:3 Cream:0 Random human:1
great story, kill amy ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you and now we have a tie.
Author's Response: And the breakdown so far is: Tails:1 Knuckles:1 Amy:3 Rouge:3 Cream:0 Random human:1
okay (gulps) um I um oh! right Stories good so far and i vote anyone BUT cream cause she cute
Author's Response: Aww, you sure? Cute child murders are delicious to perform...*shifty eyes* so I've heard.
Author's Response: And the breakdown so far is: Tails:0 Knuckles:1 Amy:2 Rouge:3 Cream:0 Random human:1 (I added 1 to everyone but Cream to include the odd method of voting)
Author's Response: whoops, that's Tails:1 as well ^^'
hmmmmm.......I liked it that's for sure but my question is how is this Sonadow? As for my vote I say off Amy.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it and it's not Sonadow...yet. I never start these with the pair already together or already with feelings for each other. It has to develop. You'll see...after all, Sonic's already feeling awkward about Shadow's girlfriend...
Author's Response: And the breakdown so far is: Tails:0 Knuckles:0 Amy:1 Rouge:2 Cream:0 Random human:0
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