COOL! :-D
Nice work so far. I like the realism believable to. I love the part where they try to find stuff abut sex on the internet. I laughed so hard a scared my cat.
AH wtf lol i want to know.
lol this is hilarious XD.
Funny and amusing as usual. Nice job. ^^ Your dialogue is beyond awesome.
Sweet as always! Getting better abd better!
I.....must....KNOW!!!! I have a feeling though....>
This story never ceases to amuse me. Please update soon.
I was laughing the entire time...SOnic was very cute and his personality was just soft and pleasing...very nice work I favored it! :)
Author's Response: I try to keep characters as in character as I can, but sometimes the vanilla personality SEGA gave them just isnt enough. :) Call it 'artistic liberty". lol Thanks for the review!
I think sixteen is just barely the legal age, actually. Just barely, but it is. Or maybe I was mistaken. Heh. *shrugs* The whole "eye" section was a riot, along with the cleaning part. Quite entertaining as usual. Fantastic job. ^^
Author's Response: Thanks a bunch. :)
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