Wow i've been keeping up with this story since the beginning, sorry i haven't commented i've only just remembered my password. XD
But this really is a brilliant story, its my favourite sonadow of all time. I must admit i waited forever for some romance but it was well worth it when it finally came to light. Please keep up the fantastic work, i really do look forward to chapter updates, im checking all the time to see if there is one. =D Your writing is perfect, and description is first class. Well done!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks! I'm happy you enjoy the story and reviewed^^ I'll try to keep it up... :P
Aww, I love the little spots of romance here and there. It was soo cute. Shadow really seems to love Sonic so much. It makes me feel fuzzies in my stomach and they feel so good. ^^
Author's Response: :D Thanks! Yes, he's really starting to come out of his shell, isn't he...:P Hope you like the new chapter, too!
Yay!! They finally stopped being oblivious and found each others love! Absolutely LOVE this story, I have read it over 2 or 3 times now for fun.
(Off topic note : When reading this last chapter, I think I found a small mistake. Just when Shadow puts his hand on sonic's leg, he right after randomly asks, "Yes, Sonic", when Sonic said or did nothing to him to reply to Sorry about being a grammar nazi, it is a terrible habbit -.-)
Author's Response: Hahah, glad to hear you like it so much! XD The 'Yes, Sonic?' -bit is because Sonic goes 'Sh-Shadow...' before, but then is a bit too breathless to finish any sentence. Shadow teases him a bit by pretending he'd like to know what Sonic is trying to say (as if it wasn't totally clear^^). And no worries, I prefer a proper grammer nazi over chtspk users anyday. ;)
IT'S ABOUT DAMN TIME YOU STARTED THEIR RELATIONSHIP!
Anyway good chapter, but I dislike that Shadow is dominating (I HATE SHADOW DOMINATE, SONIC IS BETTER THAN SHADOW)
Author's Response: Well...Shadow is only more likely to "dominate" (I prefer the term "lead"...) in bed, since in this universe, he's slightly more experienced. However, I do try to show them as equals in all other aspects, since I'm a huge Sonic fangirl and despise nothing more than him being a helpless uke.
Not going to lie, I literally exploded when I read this chapter. A long time coming, but so worth it.
Thank you x 100000000
Author's Response: Oh deary me, has someone pieced you together again by now? XD Glad you liked, despite the insane lag, I do update this story :P
I really love how you bring anxiety to the readers by making them want the two to get together and we finally get our reward in this chapter. Your fanfics really inspire me to want to write. (If I can ever get off my lazy butt and actually write some sonadow!)
Author's Response: wow, that is an incredible compliment, thanks :) I'm glad you enjoy the story^^
Oh. Thank. GAWD. Smoochery, at long last! The scene is just the way I would picture it, given the circumstances, and I really like how Sonic's reluctant to just jump in to the sexual side of things. With that hesitation and the slight awkwardness, the relationship continues to have a realistic feel to it.
...Also, the Mario comment: I lol'd.
Anyhow, this is lovely! Can't wait to see the next bit! :3
Author's Response: Heh, thanks a lot for the long review! :D I was hoping it would seem a bit more realistic this way, so I'm glad you think I succeeded. And Mario, of course. XD
Sweet mother of god! THANK YOU!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: No worries, happy to know you enjoyed it. Thanks for the comment :)
XD AWWW! That's EXCELLENT! YAAAAY!
Author's Response: (bows) always glad to please... :P
Awwwwww!!! That's cute^^ They finally kiss
Author's Response: ^^ Thanks! Happy to hear you liked!
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