Yet another..Well two lines i couldn't stop laughing about for about 5 mins.
“MY PRINCE! BREAKFAST!”
And it was at that point that Jet the Hawk had never been in greater mortal danger."
"Uh-huh. Uh-huh. My address? Why do you need my — oh, okay. My name is Knuckles the Echidna and I live in the Hidden Palace on a Flying Island…”
There was a click."
The randomness is what gets to me.
Now if you'll excuse me..
I need to get my tounge reatached. T-T
This is kind of weird, but I couldn't stop laughing for 5 mins when I read this line.
"The edges of the Ultimate Lifeform’s mouth twitched just slightly and for a while they just gazed at each other silently, the dim glowing of the coal basin making this the most romantic torture chamber possible."
Untill I bit my Tounge..Too hard T_T
Awsome stories, keep up the good workz~
I'm really loving this so far, you're a really good writer. I'm looking fowards to seeing the next chapter :)
AWWWWWW!!!!I love the ending!i can't wait for it to continue!!!!!i am REALLY into this story!!!!sonadow is SO cute!!!and there are so many GREAT sonadow fanfic writers out there!!!just like you!
this chapter is really funny at the ending...i like the part when sonic says
"the lizard needs to get laid"it was hilarious!!!great job!
Looks like Sonic finally realized the truth. Now if only Shadow would. When I first read this I was questioning whether this had much more that just Sonic/Shadow being frineds as opposed to love. But it seems to have finally opened up (Can't think of a better way to put it at the moment.) But I liked this from the begininning anyway.
Much better. I can't wait to see more. Poor Sonic...I hope he can admit his feelings for Shadow soon.
I think that may be the least romantic and most hilarious chocolate-eating scene I have ever read in a relationship-centric story. I love it.
This Chap was funny especially when 'Amy' wanted to hold Sonic... "I hate you, Shadow. I really do." I laughed for a good 2 minutes. :D
Hey, this is briliant. no spelling/grammar miskates so far. how long till the next installment? hopefully it is soon. =)
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