I half expected Shadow to get angry and yank those quills like he was about to kill him. I love plot twists. Very good.
I always give a little chuckle when you add the part of the Sonic world we know. If Tails means what I think he meant when he said "Stop Shadow from doing things to him." Then this is going to be a really messed up story. In a wierd sort of way, not a bad way. It is interesting though. Leaves me wondering.
Aw, I really liked this chapter. Heck, this whole story makes me check up pretty much every day! I love it!
Finally, you updated! Okay, you tortured me by not posting the next chapter. I needed this; so not in the best mood right now. @_@; Anyways, I don't think Sonic deserves that. I'd be just as furious if someone tried to rape me, even though he shouldn't of taken it out on Shadow. But honestly, the way Shadow is feeling, I don't think he has the heart to. :P
Author's Response: Yush, a Sonic supporter! XD You'd be surprised how many people on ffnet wanted Shadow to 'get the hell on with it!'^^" Glad you liked the update, tho - I'll make sure the next one is a bit more light-hearted, hahah^^ Thanks for reviewing! :D
Hope Shadow will not go through with ripping Sonic's spines out, but looks like I will have to wait for the next chapter to find out. Please update soon
Author's Response: Sure will! As for shadow - well, were you pleased with his decision?^^ Thanks for reviewing!
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looooooooooooove it. lol
Welcome back! How was the trip?
The fight scene...was well written I was just a wee bit handicapped when it came to visualizing what you wrote >.o
That Dingo was annoying...buuut I can see Sonic running into him again on his way to find Shadow. Then Shadow shows up and madness ensues buuuuut, you're the author, not moi. SO! good job and I look forward to the next chapter :)
Author's Response: Heh, I try to do my best! ;) The dingo...mayyy be a problem for those two, yeah. XD Not the last they've seen of him, either...but please enjoy the new chappie now adn read for yourself! :D
Fun Fact: This chapter shares a title with one of my favorite manga/manwha series of all time. This pleases me.
Anyhow, I love the intensity in this chapter! You have a talent for writing dramatic scenes... Well, come to think of it, you seem to be pretty good all 'round, so... yeah. I can't wait to see the next chapter! :3
Author's Response: Fun Fact: I never read that Manga, but I liked the title of it...XD heh, thanks, that review made me smile.^^ I'll try to update soon!
ZOMG, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Here it is! Enjoy, and thanks for commenting!
very fluffy but very cool too!
“…as soon as we’re home, I’ll have horrible revenge. You know that, right?” that's so fresh! lol
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