Keep up with the great work. =) You're doing fine for being in Japan (which, I'm completely envious about). Anyway, love how it's going so far, and I'm happy to see a bit sexual frustration go on between the two. xD It's about time; funny yet almost adorable to see Sonic get all worried about it. I can't wait to see how they progress into their feelings. =)

And yeah, screw Jet; he sucks.

ha. just keeps getting better and better I think.

and as you are smushed for time to give us members a decent fic, I don't really wanna complain about the while italics thing but....yeah XD that was a weird read I feel slanted now :p

For some reason I liked the oart where Shadow snapped, not only that 'moment', but just the emotion of that chunk. Also Jet *sigh* he's such a weiner! XD he's gonna get his ass kicked by Shadow or Sonic. As I read though I pegged Jet to go a bit ferther with Sonic before Shadow rained on his parade.

Author's Response: Arrgh. I spend about twenty minutes editing this thingy and then one little slip up has it as a thirty degree angled catastrophe. Fixed now, tho, thnaks for poiting it out! :D Im glad you enjoy the story, thanks a lot for the review too.^^ As for who will finally claim Sonic first you will still have to read to find out! XD I have a feeling there is little love lost...;)

I think I owe you a review....maybe not :)

anyway I think I said this earlier if not i'll say it now. you can only pretend for so long and my fav. chunk in this chapter proves that.

•Sonic drew up his shoulders, palms held upward at his sides. “Well, it’s like that…” he said, giving a lop-sided grin, “I can’t leave my Master."•

I like the way he says that and the whole meaning of it and what you can take from it as well.

"Well. So far, so good."
very good I think, I think everyone on this site does, lol

"How to get the Emerald from Black Doom?"
you can make it easy or hard...but you're the author so have fun with it.

"And is this reality's Knuckles right in what he said...? "
he's totally RIGHT!!!!.....o.o

"What grade did Shadow get in Lazar's surprise pop quiz?"
........idk....o.o

lol, well yeah, that's my review, yo.

Another great chapter! Are you gonna write about their own home dimension, too? I wanna see what good ol' medieval Sonic and Shadow are up to. XD

I really enjoy this story so far, and honestly, I am not into the whole 'slave/master' sonadow reality, but I like this one so far.

Hope you update soon. :3

Author's Response: Heh, thanks! I hope YOU'll update your epic on ffnet as well, I love that one...^^ but hey, even if you're not such a big fan of slave stories, in here there's hopefully enough friendship stuff to make up for it. ;) Or you could always read my *other* fic, which is a lot less serious and presents the hedgies with some entirely different problems. XD Thanks for commenting!