'Quickly, he grabbed the mob and...' I think you meant "mop." ^^; Anyways, I assume the mongoose is Mina. Interesting. As always, you had some interesting dialogue and some decent emotion. Well done. ^^ And, I think Shadow has it worse. He has to regress in his intelligence if he doesn't want to be hanged for being a witch. XD
Author's Response: Oh. yes. Bad typo. XD And yup, that's Mina, even though she refuses to give her name...^^ (but you have to admit, Shadow getting chased by an angry mob/mop which is going: "Burn the witch! Burn the spawn of satan!" would be utterly hilarious...
Hey
cool
maybe you could put a bit more from shadows perspective
that would be cool
also, maybe sonic could get cought and shadow would have to pubicly give sonic a punishment
hmmmnm...... that could work
bye for now not forever
Author's Response: Well, Shadow's off to his lessons currently, but I'll see that he gets a few parts next chappie...;) Ahh, will Sonic get caught or not? Only time will tell - thanks for the review!^^
Cool
you finally got some sonadow/fluffy bits in
nothing i can really say excapt good job
if i think of anything i'll let you know
bye for now not forever
Author's Response: Of course there's fluff, I am pretty much the queen of that stuff. ;) Thanks for commenting! :D
I loved this chapter, Sonadow fluff makes me smile my face off. ^-^ Can't wait for the next chapter, you've done a really great job so far.
Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you like the next chappie as well, thanks for commenting!^^
Yay fluffiness! Can't wait for the real relationship to kick in.
Author's Response: Well, these two hot-shot rivals do tend to take their time, don't they?;) No worries, it's all planned out...:D
more please i want to read more. man what really caught my eye was towards the end the scar part and after that was sweet really got me wanting just dream about what may happen later on. but this is your story please write more
Author's Response: Sure, more is on the way.^^ Yup, the scar part was interesting to come up with...thx for commenting!
Hurray, an update!
Author's Response: ...and another one. ;) Thanks for that review!
Wow this is just a really well written story, I didn't want to stop reading!
Author's Response: Heh, thanks! Glad you like it, and thank you for taking the time to comment!
omg the gag thing really go to me use it shadow you know you want to haha yea this fanfic is awesome cant wait for the next part
Author's Response: Thanks! Though if Shadow tried to use that gag right now, Sonic would slap him silly, methinks...;) I'll update soon! :D
The ginger root was a riot. XD Your style, like everyone else is saying, is simply amazing. Can't wait to see what you make next. This is a fantastic story. I find it interesting how the canon characters are making the change to make this a sonadow. Very believable and you seem to be good at that.
Author's Response: Hi there, Takashi! Wow, thanks for the praise - yeah, this time it's no love-at-first-sight fairytale but things take some more time...glad you like it, tho, even if everyone is already clamouring for smut! XD Thanks for taking the time to review, as always!
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