Holy crap.
Holy craaaap. This is amazing. Absolutely phenominally amazingly with sheer brilliance and I can't make an even more ridiculous sentence. But really, I haven't been as addicted to reading something since A Matter of Trust.
Words can't even begin to describe how great this is, despite the fact I'm not too into a few things in this story. I love it. Love it love it love it love it. :D Pleeeeease write more soon, I'm just writhing in anticipation over here!
Author's Response: Heyyy, you write Moments in Time! I SO wanna read more, thanks for the review! Maybe you'll like my other Sonadow story, too? ;) You make me blush! XD I'll update soonish, promise!
MAN, the anticipation is killing me...and all those teasers, OMG! I cannot wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad to hear that!^^ More is on its way...this site is great. :D Thanks for the review!
Alrighty Mon chere!
I've been meaning to review this story for the longest time but, yeah, schools comming to a close for me so yeah, no time for this. but i'm makng time now :)
I love your writing style =0 so yeah, you have top 5 on that for me. Your characterization....wrong word? i dun care, lol -> the way you portray sonic and Shadow IF this really would happen to them is just how i'd imagine it all to go.
i like your description....I think I have a thing for describing things, i'm a visual person, so more details the better....for me anyway :O
um, fav. part? in ch. 4? the ending i'd say, because Sonic's reactions to Shadow are funny, and if i was there with Sonic in Shadow's position i'd mess with him a bit more just to get him flustered, seems fun. lol
Favorite line? that'd have to be “Okay, fine. You win. Now roll the hell over.” - 'Prince' Shadow in chapter 2. i love that part and i'd have to say that's my fav part so far outts the whole thing.
anything...? how are you? :3
Author's Response: WOW, thanks for that long an detailed review! Well, school *came* for a close to me two days ago, so now I have all the time in the world for writing! XD I'm glad you like the characterization of the two - I write a lot of fanfic set in canon with them, so I find that helps a lot when you want to keep them IC when writing sonadow. And no worries, Messing With Sonic will begin soon enough...I'm also glad you like the detail - and in comparison to my other sonic fanfic, this is actually a very sparse amount. XD So, thanks a lot for taking the time to review and point out your favourite parts - gives me all the more motivation, next chappie should be up soon.^^
Yes a very Very horrible revenge indeed :) nice Chapter, a little lacking in Sonadow but you dont really want it to turn into mindless Smut just yet, i like this Chapter best so far, Cant wait for the next part ^^
Author's Response: Well, there is a mindless smut one-shot on the cards, y'know? XD I think I'll upload it some time soon...happy to hear you like this chappie best so far! :D Thanks for the review!^^
Yes a very Very horrible revenge indeed :) nice Chapter, a little lacking in Sonadow but you dont really want it to turn into mindless Smut just yet, i like this Chapter best so far, Cant wait for the next part ^^
Hey
it's getting interesting
but there are still no sonadow parts (technicly there are but nothing big)
don't get me worng, i love it, but if you could add some sonadow in that would be much apprcieated. thanks
bye for now, not forever
Author's Response: Well, most of this chappie was more mental sonadow than anything else. I have a one-shot consisting of brainless smut coming up soon, though. XD Right now, Sonic and Shadow need to go from being friendly enemies/rivals/uneasy friends to being lovers...to make that transition smoothly and believable, I have to go a bit into their thoughts. Right now Sonic would run and not stop if you suggested a kinky bondage session with Shadow in the dungeons. XD But no worries, some full-blown sonadow is planned and next chapter will have some sonadow fluff at least...;) Thanks for your review!
Mainly the anticipation of what COULD happen...whether its training, or even Sonic getting ravaged...ya know, hot, kinky stuff. I can't wait to see what happens next =D. All those little teasers jus got me excited...especially what Jet was doing to Sonic with the crop...I wish I could see Shadow do that with him...heheh XD
Author's Response: Well, just you wait.;) So far, Sonic still seems a bit...reluctant, doesn't he? XD Then again, maybe that's about to change...;)
Your dialogue is well thought out, as per usual. I can't really think of anything to help you with. Sorry. ^^; The story's a riot, though. Sonic doesn't seem to be complying with his new position in life. XD
Author's Response: No, he certainly doesn't XD - that's what made the plot interesting for me, too, because "Sonic" and "slave" seem to be as opposite as it could get. But mind you, with the factor "Shadow" in there as well, the equation might just work...;) Thanks for the review, I really appreciate them! :D
IEEEE, that was so awesome, I cannot wait for more...mmm...
Author's Response: Heh, thanks!^^ Just tell me what you liked best to make this story even better! ;)
I liked when Sonic was chained to the bed....then again....I have a thing with chains >> I like it and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, there is a reason I rated this BDSM, you know? *laughs* Although sonic will probably fight it all the way. ;) Thanks for commenting!
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