that was definetly more interesting than a snuggle up scene

i like how you added jet, espio and shadows feelings

maybe you could add knuckles?

it would be interesting to see how he reacts with shadow and sonic

and maybe Amy too. it would be interestin how she acts in this reality becuase in the orginal realm she is crazly obbsessed with sonic

maybe she is a person obbsessed with buying sonic as a bed slave?

now thats an epipany that just came outta nowhere

well, its turned out pretty cool so far

bye for now not forever

Author's Response: Heh, quit spying onto my notes for that story! XD Well, after 'Once Upon a Time', I think people know that I love to stick familiar characters into new situations...so, who knows, there just might be a few surprises. ;) Thanks for the review! :D

Hey

This story is pretty cool and i hope you continue it.

no grammar of spelling mistakes that i've spotted.

maybe at the begining of the next chapter have a little bit where either sonic or shadow (Shadow preferably) has just woken up and their cuddled up next to each other.

but they are just suggestions and this is your story.

but keep up the quick and good work.

bye for now not forever

Author's Response: *laughs* heheheh, there will be cuddling in his fic, but not in the next chappie...Sonic's situation when he wakes up will be a "little" bit different. ;) Glad you like the story so far, thanks for your review!^^

HA! the ending was fuckin halarious.

hm, still good, little to no errors, that I saw of...Takashi may have found some XD

I don't like Lazar.....he'd a annoying sadist :p and yeah. can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yup, that's Lazar for you...goos thing for Sonic he's not actually at his mercy yet, huh?^^ Thanks for commenting! :)

Interesting. Wonder how Shadow knows the lizard's (stereotypical) name. I'm curious to see how this plays out with their canon personalities, being in such situations. (Still deny the existence of canon in my stories, though. I like thoughts of Jason Griffith not existing as Sonic's voice.) Any who, very original. Keep up the good work. ^^

Author's Response: Black Doom addresses the lizard as 'Lazar' when they are in the throne room.;) And would you please not mention that man? Just the thought of him gives me a headache. XD Thanks for the review, glad you like it! :D

huh....well, I like it :)

lol, I like how you did like this combination of the two stories you mentioned in your AN...or was it the authors....well which ever. It's a cool mix.

nicely done. I like the details you gave and yeah. I look forward to the next chapter :D

Author's Response: Happy to hear that.^^ Details won't be abundant, but I'll do my very best to not make it look rushed. Thanks for commenting!