Why did Shads do that? :S
Author's Response: Doooooooooooooo what?
Interesting. A few spelling/grammatical errors, but I still like the story. Can't wait to see next chap. XD
I think there's an error in the upload. It stops mid word. Try to see if you can fix it. Any who, interesting start. ^^
Author's Response: it dosent stop, my boyfriend distracted me before i could finish but its done now so there ya go!
Awesome idea! Writing skills? Not so much. I award you for your idea, though. Please. Study up on writing. Do not introduce your stories with an explanation in the first few sentences. Makes it seem choppy. And have longer chapters with more details, please. But, I'm begging you, continue! This idea is very, very original! I love it! :D (I swear I'll try to help you get better at writing, if you want.) Any who, nice job. Just work on your grammar, length, and sentence structures, okay? ^^
Author's Response: yeah im doing my best but this isnt the whole chapter. i sorta have to update it in parts right now because of school but im getting there. Thanks for the advice and ill try.
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