Hmm...I think I got a clue about Sonic's 'dreams'...Nice job. Please continue!!! I really want to see what happens after chapter 5! 10/10
I just love this story its so hilarious i've read at least 5x XD. I hope that you would continue it :)
I love this story. I hope you update soon!
O.o Wow..........sister:puts a what the fuk look
OK there's one part here I like the most and my least favorite part. Bad news first so... Maria having sex with Shadow! I can conjour up some rather distubing images considering they're two completely different species. Especially considering she died 50 years ago I guess I'm just used to him sulking over her. Now of course, my favorite part was the funniest part.
"WHAT? YOU DIDN'T WANT TO ATTACK THEM BECAUSE THEY WERE F***ING?" Robotnik yelled at Coconuts.
Rare word used in Sonic the Hedgehog so I laughed naturally. But like all your work. Very good.
Well despite the POV situation, I liked it. Tails' "Gross, yuck etc." always makes me laugh. Especially witht that "Owls are hyper these days" line. I always come here for a good laugh. People in one way or another put random comedy in their stories. Aside from the occasional depressing story.
No offense, but your logic is faulty. Simply making a point there. A narrator is outside the story, true, but the narrator is not a person at all. The narrator is omniscient. You could always used limited third PoV to solve that issue, too. Just a tip. XD Any who, still, a good story. Just thought I'd point that out fer ya. See ya. ^^
Author's Response: Well alright. I'm sorry for my troubles. D:
Author's Response: You know what? Maybe I can try to edit it, by removing some POVs, but with the same text.
I recall enjoy this story because of the slap-stick humour used in it. Style is in need of some works, but I still love this story. Good to know you're back on the site. I like your stories. (Immoral Brothers on ff.net was decent, too. Don't like the constant PoV change, but an interesting concept.) Nice job, as I said before. AoStH rules! XD
Author's Response: The reason I put in so many POVs was because if the narrator is telling the story, how will the narrator know what he/she's thinking about? So, I put in different narrators to let you read what they're thinking, instead of the narrator being psychic. And yes, I will put Immoral Brothers on here as well, for others to see, since it has a lot of sonadow.
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