^^ Shadow-sama reminds meh of Yusuke from Yu Yu Hakusho in this chapter. Everyone thinks he's a jerk, but when you get to know him, he's a good guy..playing with kids (not that way) and I'm rambling. Anymoo, I'm glad Shadow-sama ish going back to see Sonic. The way Shadow was worrying about Sonic maybe rejecting him was cute. I just hope GUN doesn't screw up everything -_- Enjoy your week off (you deserve it ^^)
Author's Response: Heh... V^/_^V I know its kinda cliche, that 'bad' person is really nice... but I had to. I thought Shadow would respond better to children. The whole Maria as nice, and Gerald as a sicko... And because of his past, Shadow would be worried... GUN ruins everything.
I FINALLY got around to read what you have so far, and I'd have to say that I'm interested in seeing what happens! Oh I wanna see Sonic and Shadow have a relationship! ^-^
Author's Response: Thanks... V^/_^V
^.^ It's my pleasure to review a good story. I just love how you're building up Sonic/Shadow-sama's relationship, so it feels more realistic. You also have a good way with words..despondent, not many people use that. I applaud your choice of words and I absolutely love what Shadow-sama was talking about, ya know, how humans take and never give back. So true. Oh, if you're wondering why I don't say things you need to improve on is mainly because there's NOTHING I see wrong with your fic! ^___^ Its all good!!!!! I can't wait to see where Shadow-sama plans to go in the next chapter. Keep on keeping on ^^
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I thought my writing was very ameuturish actually. The comments about humans are actually my sentiments... Thank you very much.
Alright!!!! ^^ I like how you're building Sonic and Shadow-sama's relationship. Its very cute. ^_^ and good job with keepin them in character..Shadow with his attitude and Sonic being..Sonic-ish. :D Nice chapter titles too...I would complain that the chapters were short, but you posted them on the same day, so its all good. I'll be waiting for the next chapter ^^ Keep on keeping on
Author's Response: :sweatdrops: I just realised in my plan, they have no relationship beyone friends... better fix that up. V^/_^V I;m glad you like the chapter titles... I guess it adds a it of mystery to an otherwise boring story. The updating may slow down now, I've run into a few script problems... mostly that I've run out.
Nice. finally a new stroy on this page. Keep writing, bro. You're godd at this^^
Author's Response: Thank you. I have about three other Sonadow ideas. I get tonnes of ideas at the same time, then have to write them when I get time. I think I will add my other when I finish this one - my failing is thta my ideas stay unfinished for ages...
Your #1 reviewer ish back! I would just like to thank you for updating your story everyday. T-T It makes meh so happy. I'm glad this chapter was longer than the other. ^^ I can't wait to see how Shadow will react when he sees Sonic and what you have in store for them. I also like your sense of humor! ^.^ That's all I have to say!! I'll be wating for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thanks. ^_^ The reason I can update so regularily is that I've got a half written script floating around my room somewhere. I've actually split this from a large one shot to a chapter one. I couldn't figure out where to cut off the others though, thats why they were so short. Heh, Sonic won't be the only person he sees... -damn spoilers-
Hey, that wasn't so bad. I mean, yeah it was cruel and unusual and what did Shadow-sama ever do to you to deserve that?!?!? ^_^; Just kidding. It was a neat twist making Gerald a sick and twisted man. I can't wait to see what other surprises you have in store for us. Should I be scared? ^.^ Keep on writing!
Author's Response: :perks up: really? I cut the worst part. And he didn't do anything to me. He just has a depressing life. :sighs: I wish he didn't have to do that, but I couldn't think of another way to get Sonic to :slaps hand over mouth: damn spoilers. :bows: thank you.
Rather intriguing storyline, please do update soon. I'm keeping my fingers crossed for Sonic, to he'd better hurry and save Shadow... -twitch- Oo
Author's Response: Thanks. ^_^ I wanna update, but I found out that my dad found the site. :winces: He will save Shadow... but :claps hand over mouth: spoilers.
^_^ I'm liking this story! Haven't seen a rescue mission fic yet :D and you update frequently! YAY!!! This story also has a nice sense of humor. ^.^ I can't wait until chapter 3..seriously. ^_^
Author's Response: Really? I would have thought it was quite common. THey do work well together (of course thats my opinion) Humour? I guess. :looks slightly confused:
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