sonic says to shadows that hes never experienced and he should just relax and take notes when he's never experienced It himself!? he just wants shadow to be his 'bitch' but sonics seems more like the 'bitch' cause he's more feminime :D
Author's Response: He does seem feminine sometimes, doesn't he? >3
Whoa...holy fuck, this is getting good...
I love how you portray them as both fighting, dominant semes instead of one being the submissive uke. I find them very in character this way. :D
Great job as always, can't wait for the next chapter and to see who prevails.~
Author's Response: I think that best fits their personalities too. :) Hope you like the other chapters to come.
That was the best foreplay scene I have ever read. Ever. And it makes you wonder, just who will be the dominant one in the end? Great stuff; can't wait to read the next chapter! :)
wow, this is awesome ^^
Love the sex wit the switching dominance.
Cant wwait for more!
OMFGUPDATE. NOW.
Author's Response: =D Patience is a virtuuuue! DX And one day I will figure out what that means.
..And the first kiss ends well! You score so good RanRan =D
I simply cannot wait until the next chapter! This i am tempted to read >w
Congrats on making It on featured you totally deserve It!!!! ....Oooohhh!!! I wonder how shadows going to react to that kiss? Now's his change to do what feels 'natural' without getting emberrased! xD
...and i'll be eagerly awaiting the next chapter more than usual because of the cliffhanger. :B
Aw, Shadow being angry when he's confused is adorable for some reason.
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