Keep the story at the moment it's just amazing. Love it ^_^
can't wait for thenext chapter
whats next?
whats next?!?!?! i hav mental issues so if u dont keep goin somthin bad mite hapen 2 u im also wanted in 7 other states
Ooooh...finish it please! i wanna know what happens!
Good so far. But, why Bold??
Author's Response: that's like the title of the story, mistake :P
nice dude awesome
Author's Response: Thanks, well it seems some like it more then others >_>
Please, go back and write some readable material please. All I got was Sonic trying to rape Shadow in the first twenty words and some wolf dude coming to "destract" Sonic. And...Sonic crying like a half-assed baby. Not meant to be too mean or anything, but we have enough of this type of crap piling up on this wonderful site of Shadow's. We don't need another. Either take this down or rework and resubmit the first chapter after it's been reworked with some legible stuff that is pleasing to the eye. Oh, and more than 500 words. :)
Author's Response: I know and sorry ._. It was me being so goddamn lazy so I just put some meanless crap together, but I will work harder in the future!
.....I think you just crammed an entire story into 200 words no real start and they just suddenly started kissing then a plot twist and then Shadow Died? and I'm not takashi but i did spot a few spelling mistakes just try to spread the story out a bit and good writers try to wait at least a chapter before the sonadow breaks out
Author's Response: actually Sonic kissed and Shadow did not die...splat
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