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Name: Shadow (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:24 AM · For: 1 The bangle
"Author's Response: I dunno what paragraphs is so... ^^;; I don't think I can"

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THIS IS WHY PEOPLE SHOULD NOT WRITE UNLESS THEY KNOW WTF they're DOING. If you don't know what paragraphs are, you are in a LOT of trouble.

Author's Response: Excuse me? I know I am what I am writing, I just don't know the word! You really want me to get mad at you?! I hope not! >_< Have you even read what I said about it's been a long time since I wrote something! So I just need to get some time to get on the hook again jeez! Please give me at least a chance! Or I'll stop writing at all if people always say bad stuff to me! Am I making myself clear? I can't take that much! I have been scared off from my school and this isn't making it any better!


Name: keuldude (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 4:16 PM · For: 1 The bangle
Anyway, I thought the first part is awesome! keep it up!

Author's Response: thanks a lot. X3 and I will


Name: keuldude (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 4:14 PM · For: 1 The bangle
Can you use Paragraphs? Its easier on everyone's eyes...

Author's Response: I dunno what paragraphs is so... ^^;; I don't think I can


Name: Takashi the hedgehog (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 1:34 PM · For: 1 The bangle
Ooh! Djinn, as the Arabians had called them. Love those little buggers. Definitely original, I'll give you that. You could use some work with sentence structure and the beginning gave just a tad too many questions, but you're on your way. (Might want to get a few facts straight on genies, too. Since they're beings of magic, they can have legs.) Good job so far and keep on improving. ^^

Author's Response: Thanks a lot. X3 Yeah I need to practice a bit, and you'll get to know more when you get a bit further into the story, Shadow will tell about his past. Yes I know that, but I want him to have forgotten how to use magic in the start, since it has been a long time since he last used magic.


Name: Dragonscale (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:24 AM · For: 1 The bangle
This is an idea I would have NEVER thought of, I'll admit. The sentence structure was a little choppy and maybe they chummed up a little too fast, but aside from that it's awesome! ^^ I'm looking forward to seeing more of this! This is a good idea and I'm going to enjoy seeing how it fleshes out.

Author's Response: Thanks, I got the idea from a song, and I thought about making Sonadow of it at once since I haven't seen anyone here with a genie in it. X3 and I'll make it better in the next chapter I promise, I'll make it as long as I can too and so far, but it's all because I have been busy and haven't been able to make up a plot for a story. heh heh. I'll try my best


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