holy S#!$ !!!! best f#@$ing story on this site i've read-and it's only the prolouge

 

P.S. Love the disclaimer "If I did than I wouldn’t be writing this story with the millions of dollars that I could have had." epic.

I love your story,you put humor and adventure and romance togther and I think you have these two out your house. Anyway love your story and it inspired me to write my first one thanx for inspiring me ^_^

I love it. Your story it's amazing!!!!

OH COME ON!!! THATS THE END!!! Plz add more!!! dont leave us hanging!!!

...God damn you. God damn you to the greatest depths of hell. This had better have an epilogue. That ending is just to great of a cliffhanger, Master Lemon. Which means either you are planning a sequel(which I doubt, privately), or you have an epilogue planned. The later is my guess. Now, if we had seen Shadow actually die, and you pulled to a third party perspective, that would be alright. But you didn't. You left us with no idea what happened to Shdow, whether or not he actually managed to resurrect Sonic with his own lifeforce, or whether they both lived. Not to mention an explaination on how Amy and Tails, amoung others, are still alive, when we very clearly saw them die. And not even the stubborn stupidity of Knuckles would have allowed him to survive that explosion! Unless... unless this was all a dream he had in a coma, to explain why Sonic was dead. Which you still have to explain! God damn you, this story isn't done, not by a long shot, and IT NEEDS TO BE FINISHED, MASTER LEMON! IT IS VERY CLEARLY NOT COMPLETE! Finish it!

Sen'Tzu, Being of Darkness and Light.

Author's Response: Well, read it over again. This time read between the lines. It's all there, such as the point where he saw Amy die in the car. That immediately should have given it away about what was going to "possibly" happen.

Although... am I truly done with this yet? Could there be more than... oh... let's say... an epilogue? Could I have already had something in the works? Who knows, but only two hedgehog's on here. ^_^

As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^