...God damn you. God damn you to the greatest depths of hell. This had better have an epilogue. That ending is just to great of a cliffhanger, Master Lemon. Which means either you are planning a sequel(which I doubt, privately), or you have an epilogue planned. The later is my guess. Now, if we had seen Shadow actually die, and you pulled to a third party perspective, that would be alright. But you didn't. You left us with no idea what happened to Shdow, whether or not he actually managed to resurrect Sonic with his own lifeforce, or whether they both lived. Not to mention an explaination on how Amy and Tails, amoung others, are still alive, when we very clearly saw them die. And not even the stubborn stupidity of Knuckles would have allowed him to survive that explosion! Unless... unless this was all a dream he had in a coma, to explain why Sonic was dead. Which you still have to explain! God damn you, this story isn't done, not by a long shot, and IT NEEDS TO BE FINISHED, MASTER LEMON! IT IS VERY CLEARLY NOT COMPLETE! Finish it!

Sen'Tzu, Being of Darkness and Light.

Author's Response: Well, read it over again. This time read between the lines. It's all there, such as the point where he saw Amy die in the car. That immediately should have given it away about what was going to "possibly" happen.

Although... am I truly done with this yet? Could there be more than... oh... let's say... an epilogue? Could I have already had something in the works? Who knows, but only two hedgehog's on here. ^_^

As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^

I would love to beta for your next story. After all, it shall be the famed Master Lemon I a beta reading for, no? Besides, I get a preview of everything, which is always nice, especially for a writer as good as you. Until you post again,

Sen'tzu, Being of Darkness and Light

Author's Response: Well, I am not one for beta readers anymore, however the idea would help... I shall think about it. For now though I need to get this story finished and over with, but not in a rush as that creates crappy endings.

When, AND IF, I come up with a new story... I will most likely send the idea your way.

As Always, Much Appreciated. ^_^

did he die?

So, this is the Master Lemon I have heard so much about. You have an interesting writing style, but constantly get your they're's and yours wrong. Your- possessive(first person). You're-contraction for You are. There- showing or designating a place. Their-Plural possessive(third person). They're-Contraction for They Are. Common mistakes to make, and simple to correct. If you would like, I would be happy to beta for you.

Truly, an interesting story, and I wish to see more.

Sentzu, Being of Darkness and Light.

Author's Response: Well, I am working on it... even though I could do a little better to catch those mistakes. D:

As for the beta... eh... well... I haven't really thought about a beta reader since the start of this when on one wanted to do it. Since I am almost done with this story (Literally), and plan on just finishing out Genesis (As two stories, and a headache later I still cannot think straight, mainly for which I blame the Rum >.<).

If you would like to beta my next story once I get Genesis and this one finished out than let me know. XD

As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^

Hell yeah! I want blood... right now! Good addition to your story Lemon. I was beginning to wonder whether or not you were still continuing these.

Nicely done ^^

Author's Response: Wow... I don't even put this up for like half an hour and you've already commented? What... do you have some sort of mind reading power that I don't know of? Heh, anyway, I am glad that you liked it, I just hope that the ending will come out as well as I want it to.

As Always, Much Appreciated ^_^