I don't care whether or not the ending was cheesy..... It was still good! ^_^
Author's Response: Aw, thanks...
Awwww, now THAT is a justified ending. Sure bad things happened, but at least it turns out just right in the end.
Author's Response: Hee, thanks. I thought that it was a little sappy, but then all I intended this to be was fluff... So I guess it's OK ^_^
Good idea on making him brown like you did! Green and blue combined are a brown color. But has anything else changed, like his quillstyle?
Also I like how you portrayed Scourge. He's a lot more vicious than other versions of him I think. :)
Anyway, great story so far! I hope to see another chapter sometime. :)
Author's Response: Sonic and Scourge basically have the same style of quills, so I doubt that they'd change much... And thanks, I suppose I did pretty good for having almost no foreknowledge of Scourge's personality. There'll be a new chapter soon!
Well done... ^_^
Author's Response: Thanks!
Aww, I was kinda hoping for a Blue Sonic and blue eyes ^^' Aw well. Not bad.
Author's Response: Eh, I was thinking about doing something like that, but I guess combining their colours won over in the end...
Heh, you're right about the ending, Sonic's sealed his fate right there! Awesome idea, I like it particularly because someone who hasn't read the comics can still get this. And I think you shouldn't worry if it's canon or not - it's fan fiction after all.
Author's Response: Fairly ironic then - I never read the comics myself. And yes, Sonic's pretty much doomed isn't he? Thanks for reviewing!
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